Magazine Cover - Draft 1 FEEDBACK

We presented our findings to a group of teenage people ranged from 17 to 19. The people in this sample group were all female as we wish to aim our product at this demographic. Below is the notes we took when people were analysis our work for what they liked about it and what they felt needed improvement. 

Things that people liked about our magazine cover included the fact that it was quite simplistic, it was not overcrowded yet still contained all of the information which you would expect from a magazine cover. A lot of the audience really liked that we have a few graphic features on our magazine cover, such as the circle full of information and the small square saying "exclusive". They people viewing our magazine cover said they really liked how these graphic features matched up, they contained the same black colour theme with a small white line around then edge. These also go well with the titles, as they are also made up of lines. They did say that we should possibly move around some of the graphic features to make them fill up different parts of the page. 

The people viewing our magazine cover also liked the way the text and image overlapped, although they believed that we needed to move the title up as because of the layers within the image of pandora and the tree she is hiding behind, it looks a bit off as the title lays behind the character head and not the tree. By just moving the title up a little bit it won't look so off. 

Something else that the audience said we could improve was some of the text, apparently it was hard to read from the distance they were looking at it and so we my stretch the text out a bit so that it is easier to read.

Other than this, people said our magazine cover was very good and that they especially likes the editing we had added to the photograph which made the image very apparent of the genre as we editing in things like myst and shadows which are conventions of the genre.